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Redline? by Laaszul Redline? by Laaszul
It's a wolf in this pic, but feel free to offer advice for other species as well.

This year, I'm going to try to improve my anatomy. You can redline this, if you want, and give helpful tips. I want my style to still be cartoon-ish, but anatomically correct.

You can also give critiques here on the anatomy and tell me what I can fix.
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OtakuMutt Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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Sorry it's kind of messy :'D
My feral anatomy leaves something to be desired, but I gave it a shot
The main problem I can see is basically just your paws and hind legs
The "wrists" of the legs are very thin, and make the paws look rather detached
My best suggestion for that is just to look up some images of paws or paw references; there's a good number of them on deviantart that have really been a huge help in my own growing process
as far as the hind leg goes, you just made the upper part, or rather the thigh, a tad large, creating a humped back.

I'm bad at closing these things, but if you have any questions or what not, feel free to ask
Feel free to take this with a grain of salt :'D
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Laaszul Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Thanks for the help c:
Hind legs really give me trouble sometimes.
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OtakuMutt Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No problem c:
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FoodStamps1 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so you want us to download the image then edit it with helpful hints? . w . id be happy to help!
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Laaszul Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Yeah ^^
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FoodStamps1 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aweosme! ^^ ill help chu out > w >
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Mikufresa Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Still need help? uvu
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Laaszul Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Yes :) I'm always open for tips/advice on my anatomy.
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Mikufresa Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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I made it today in like 20 mins so it looks kinda crappy |D but hope it helps!
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Laaszul Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Thanks :D

Didn't know the back didn't have a curve :P
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